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Bellflower Part 54

🕑 Added 2024-09-22 21:46:21 +0000 UTC

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Debauched Sloth

I always enjoy checking in on the missing ladies but this one was really good. Love this new twist in the story. What with the abductions and the advanced technology, I'm getting a bit of an extraterrestrial vibe of this mysterious "presence"...

Josh Gibson

It always felt like we have been waiting to circle back around to Daphne. I like her - hope this means she’s about to start showing up a little more.

Shibuyasake

I hope Courtney will get her time to shine one day, even if she's rather passive nowadays hahah

Foolishmonkey

That makes sense, I had just remembered the last time we saw Courtney she tried to moved but couldn't, and when someone asked if it was from not moving in awhile or if she was too fat to move you had replied it was a bit of both, leaning more in the former then the later, and since dawn seems clearly more in the later state and it being only the second time we've seen her pov since the upgrade it was more of a whiplash compared to Courtney, that and I'm still confused how long Courtney has been there vs dawn along with if they stop growing at a certain point or if there are some really massive residents there. Just some questions i had, feel free to ignore if they give away anything for whatever the grand reveal is down the road. great chapter regardless, imo one of your best wg writing you've done so far

BNevis

Thanks! I like writing the Dawn/Courtney parts. The only problem there's not much they can really do at this point, so I have to keep them kind of sparing. Since her introduction, the idea was for Daphne to play a much larger part in all this than people would first imagine.

BNevis

I mean I'd like to think that once Penny takes them away, everyone just balloons immediately. I wasn't trying to convey that Dawn had gained any faster than Courtney, just that she was having a moment of clarity & could feel just how big she was, whereas Courtney's thoughts are always a bit more swimmy & loose.

Foolishmonkey

I'm more curious how these things and penny are connected, or why they seemingly want the Bellflower residents constantly overstuffed and too fat to move

Foolishmonkey

I'm surprised dawn is already as big as it is implied, it seems she gained far quicker then Courtney did

Shibuyasake

Absolutely love how you tease the expansive vastness from the pov of somebody not being themself for a long time. I adore that Dawn part and just how deeply shes screwed. I hope to read more on her and Courtney in the future maybe we could even get to know Nadia a little more! I like the supernatural elements and how vague and hard to tell everything is. You really mastered the art of perspective. Also the development with Daphne seems like alot of fun and promising for the future. Excited for catching up with Regina and the otheres next time


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