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An Alternate Essence: Of Blood and Sunlight II

🕑 Added 2018-07-21 17:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Caractacus

That might be a good point to work into part 3, if and when it's written. In fact, it might be a good place to *start* part 3, with Taylor saying something like, "I've been thinking. About what you said. I don't believe you."

Aria Raney

Its interesting, but I feel like Taylor believes her too quickly. The only evidence she has that she's telling the truth is that she enjoyed the taste of blood and feels thirsty, but as far as Taylor knows she's lying about it being blood, it was just a red liquid that doesn't smell or taste anything like blood has before now. She hasn't seen her new appearance/lack of a reflection, burned in sunlight, or used any of her new powers.


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