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(CiP) [Hereafter] Chapter III: Limitations
🕑 Added 2021-04-04 16:28:58 +0000 UTCI...am actually not sure what to call this one. What I have up there currently isn't a title I'm married to, so it might change when the time comes for this chapter to come out in full. For now, though, I'll stick with this.
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Comments
Caractacus
That can be changed up, if needed. I think I'll wait until it goes public and see how the general reaction goes, and if it's still a problem, switch something else in that conveys the same vibe of "I was expecting more detail than that."
Mordred
Still good, however Rika saying that she expected at least three paragraphs of exposition was a bit to much of a fourth wall break for me.
