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[Hereafter] Chapter XI: Red Hound
🕑 Added 2021-05-29 19:37:44 +0000 UTCThe meaning of the title should become obvious at the end of the chapter.
Here's another long one, everyone. Somehow, I keep writing these 5-6k things, so I hope you're enjoying having longer chapters to sink your teeth into.
Next chapter, I think we'll officially start Orleans. It might not be until near the end of the chapter, but next chapter, I think.
Looks like I was wrong. There'll be one more Lucky Numbers chapter before the official release of Hereafter to the public.
Comments
Mordred
Yes I know that Boudica would but it was the wording, "boudica's rebellion succeeded" it implies that was always their goal and the aim of the rebellion, if you switch it to something like, even taken Rome or something else it would fit a bit better.
Caractacus
With a Holy Grail, though, taking Rome would've not only been *possible*, it would've been inevitable. It's easy to forget, but the Boudicca we meet as a Servant was mellowed by time, distance, and the fact she was already long dead. Living Boudicca might very well have marched all the way into Rome and taken Nero's head on a pike, if she had the power to do so.
Mordred
Mostly good, I'd tweak the bit about Boudica's rebellion slightly they where never going to take Rome nor where they planning on, a massive success would have been independence while taking some of Gaul.
