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[Hereafter] Chapter LXVII: Engine of Destruction
🕑 Added 2022-08-29 21:59:18 +0000 UTCGoddamn hot!
This chapter gave me a bit of trouble in the fight scenes and such, but what really delayed this was the simple fact that it's been really hot the last several days, which made it hard to get enough sleep to have the energy for writing this. To make up for it, have the literal longest chapter in the story so far, at just about 7300 words.
Altera was a bit difficult to do justice by, just by virtue of the fact that the team has a pretty solid group to fight her with. My solution might not have been the most elegant, but it certainly makes her feel intimidating, doesn't it?
Next chapter will be an interlude. Sorry to leave you on a cliffhanger for another two weeks like that, but the interlude is about justifying a certain someone's presence in this chapter. And also to reveal a secret I've been holding onto.
Did you think I'd forgotten about Connla? ...Well, that's fair. I actually did forget about Jing Ke for the entirety of the Romulus fight, so I had to sneak in a reference to her disappearance in this chapter.
EDIT: Moving down.
Comments
V01D
If ANYONE would have the synergy to summon Altera, it would be Taylor! Why would Lev know to call her Altera, instead of Atilla? Isn’t that something she decided on in the Moon Cell?
cystrom
Holy cow, this is crazy. Well done!!!
Gifted-Monster
Did Jing hook up with a stoner, a nerd, a dog, a model and a detective in their magical van? After all...Jing Ke's! I am NOT apologizing. And damn! My girl Altera being a machine for massacre! Don't take this the wrong way but I am hoping for some real brutality here. :D Show us, Scourge of God! Show us more!
Green0Photon
Connla? Whomegalul
