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[Hereafter] Chapter XCI: Euryale's Woe
🕑 Added 2023-02-25 11:24:46 +0000 UTCThis is where I start to throw some more wrenches into things. Even if the stupidly convoluted plot makes it hard to do much with Okeanos without revamping the whole thing, there's still a few things I want to do to spice up the subplots.
There were also a lot of places where Taylor felt like she got to strut her social fu. I don't know if you can call it charisma, but it definitely did what she wanted it to do, and I really liked how those sections turned out.
EDIT: Moving down.
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V01D
“It’s all the more I have”? I’d say ‘it’s all I have’ or ‘I don’t have any more’, not an amalgamation of both…
Gifted-Monster
Given the mentioning of the curse, my money is on Medea given she was cursed to aid...Jason iirc?
Green0Photon
😡
Caractacus
I wonder...
Green0Photon
Ah, sorry, I wasn't specific enough. I know who Calliope the Muse is, but I don't think this is that person. Parts of the text make it seem like you don't plan for this person to be her either, and just is a disguise.
Caractacus
A Muse from Greek mythology. Her domain is eloquence and epic poetry. She's also Orpheus' mom — the guy who tried to rescue his lover from the underworld, and failed because he didn't follow instructions not to look at her until after they'd escaped.
Green0Photon
Who the heck is Calliope?
Gifted-Monster
As I said. Euryale, my ale, everybody's ale!
