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[Hereafter] Chapter CLV: The Evil Fairy
🕑 Added 2024-06-30 02:27:52 +0000 UTCI think this is going to very much be a hit or miss kind of chapter. It's going to depend entirely and completely on what you think of a certain someone and how I interpreted her for this chapter and Hereafter in general. I'll release their material pages to accompany next chapter, when the last bit of spoilery information is no longer a concern.
For now, however... Well, there' s not a lot I could say that wouldn't reveal too much, so I guess I just have to leave it in everyone's hands to read and give their feedback. I imagine some of you saw this coming because you were paying attention to all of the flags I've been waving in your faces the past dozen or so chapters, but I hope that you still enjoyed the end result.
EDIT: Moving down all the way. 8/10/24
Comments
Noah Andrulis
Personally, I think it fits. Yes, it could be a bit more dramatic, but all drama and no comedy or sappiness makes for a duller story in the long run.
Caractacus
Mal's pride is her defining characteristic, at least in the OG fairytale, so whenever something threatens that, she gets angry. I had loads of fun dreaming up her incantations, though. The poetic rhyming was a pretty cool way of doing things.
Benjamin Mages
It's pretty karmic that she was only even able to be defeated when she turned into a dragon. It gave her a power up but the trade offs were not worth it. Of course she wasn't in the most calm and rational state of mind when she did so.
s22132
Another fun chapter.
Pedro F
That ending was extremely anticlimactic.
Gifted-Monster
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=44xzrOo4bB4 Awww, Jalter on Valentines Day! :D
