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🕑 Added 2022-01-18 04:40:05 +0000 UTC

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Imef

And I'm wondering whether Dom ended up where Davy wanted him in the first place. As an up-and-coming captain.

Storyhunter

I'm wondering when Davy will come knocking.

Storyhunter

Neat set up. For leadership.

Young Youghurt

Hooo special ships. Nice. Gotta catch them all! On one hand Domenic is practical and makes do with what he has, on the other hand how long can he possibly make do with subpar ships? Can't wait for the next arc. From point of a reader it seems the possibilities are as endless as the oceans.

Red Bombadil

There are, in fact, some special ships that Dom might be interested in…

Young Youghurt

From Seaborn to Sealord

Zachary T Pruckowski

To me it's less the fact that the ships themselves aren't "cool" and more the fact that Dom fairly openly thinks they're uncool. Like if Dom's headspace was "the Final Internment is a massive, invulnerable behemoth with the potential to be fitted with a massive broadside and an army of marines" then I think I'd feel differently.

Zachary T Pruckowski

In terms of your Author's Note, I think the problem is less the 100K words between them than the 6 months IRL. In a straight read-through I suspect it'd be a bit less of an issue.

Young Youghurt

Hm I think Dom now only needs a man-o'-war to complete the look. With some super cool unique ability like: aura of destruction Increases all types of damage by 3% Or maybe: Cannon symphony Decreases reaload time and makes crew slightly better coordinated while firing. Anything is better than the current ships. They are not cool and the main task of protagonists ship is to look cool even if it's impractical. (Eg; capes on superheroes and anyone else. Impractical but cool.) Also I do wonder if Davy has any other independent (but loyal) subordinates. People with that trait must be rare but he is an ancient monster. He must have collected some more lieutenants right? Thank you for this neat chapter.


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