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SC-Epilogue, Part 6c

🕑 Added 2020-10-05 12:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Nick Scipio

I didn't even think of it, TBH. But here's the timeline: David was born in November 1941, so he was scheduled to retire on his 60th birthday... shortly after 9/11. I'm not inclined to retcon the story, though. I'm a "don't look back, do better next time" sort of writer... if that makes sense.

Nick Scipio

I like the idea of collecting the Prologues. Let me give my subconscious a chance to think about it too, and we'll come up with a way to make it work.

“A plane— An airliner, Dad. It flew into the building.” “Which one?” “Both.” I know, this is the "short" version of the epilogue, but as a son of a pilot it seem strange to me that Paul doesn't show more concern for his own father at least asking for which company or something. But I can be almost sure he retired already. I got lost with the ages of all the people in here with this fast forward epilogue. :)

Big Ed Magusson

There's a mention in there somewhere about Rich going to AA meetings with her.

I recognize I’m not on a requesting tier, but I have resisted going back and reviewing all of the prologue sections for some years now. I’m sure all those similarly situated would deeply appreciate rolling into the end by collecting those at the beginning of the end. It’s amazing to think you’re almost back where you started so long ago.

As a Psychologist who among other specialties helps health professionals maintain sobriety, I have not seen one mention of Christy attending AA. Paul attending Alanon? A sponsor for Christy? I know Betty Ford recommends 12 step. A mention of family treatment? Less than 20% of addicts need residential treatment. Less than that go to the hospital. Most residential programs are at least 90 days because the brain takes at least that to recover some judgement. Christy going back to her grueling art business is certainly lucrative, but hardly something I would recommend this early in her recovery. Its a set up for relapse. Granted there is so much that could be written on any subject, I felt it important to spend a moment on reality. Christy has a great support team , such as Paul getting the point that alcoholism is a family disease, and that he can’t drink either. I think the idea of different colored wine glasses so the caterers wont put wine in Christy’s glass is good. Better is Christy simply saying “No thank you”when wine is being poured. Rich drinking mineral water answers the “What no champagne “ question. I think you captured Christy’s general insecurity well, now that she can’t stuff her feelings with intoxication. She would benefit from a cognitive behavioral psychologist with a background in Recovery. Personal knowledge of Recovery is a plus. I know an excellent one around Atlanta who is superior to my skills in many ways. I sat on her PsyD commitee some years ago. If your characters could just step off the page, I’ll give you her contact information. I’m starting to miss the characters already. I’m hoping for the “Further adventures”.

I met my wife in November 2013, and her grandmother that holiday season. She (the grandmother) lived in another state, so I only got to socialize with her three times before she had a stroke in July '14. Paul had more time with Christy's grandma, but I'm sure he too feels like it wasn't enough. (Also, the end is in sight! My goodness...)

Thanks Nick. Patience is the keyword here.


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