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B2 - Chapter 17: The Burning Court

🕑 Added 2024-08-12 17:30:50 +0000 UTC

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Andrew Simpson

I really don't love the existence of Rupert as a one-dimensional heel/antagonistic plot device. Its not entirely clear to me why he would have such a large following, and why anyone would put up with his shit. Also I bet it would be easier to work on Tania's soul if Terry meshed with it! I also can't help but draw the comparison between Terry's weirdly intimate bumbling exploration of Tania's aura and the awkward bumbling of teenage physical intimacy. I dunno if that was intended, but if so it was cleverly done!


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