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10/18/19: Solving Issues!
🕑 Added 2019-10-11 02:43:44 +0000 UTC10/18/19: Solving Issues!
Finally got somewhere with Minmax's side.
I learned quite a bit too while I was fixing another artist's messy files.
So this is pretty important. I solved the depth of field issue with the models that also caused them to stay in front of any transparency at all.
I just moved the post process "Blendable Location" to "Before Transparency" and it now follows the rules of being behind transparent objects!
I'm hoping this will solve my VR problem of the shader flat out not showing up in the recorded versions. Anime shader in VR would solve so much visual trouble for me!
2 days of my week were dedicated to fixing flying chocolates.
The best thing to do when it comes to messy parenting and bringing it to UE4 is to just set everything on frame 0 to before any parenting occurs. The object should be at the origin of the scene. THEN export after using keyframes to turn off and on the parenting on frame 1.
UE4 settings need to be set where frame zero is the reference point.
Once it's in. You're good to go. Any screwed up parenting with baked animation later will rely on UE4's reference point now and CAN'T mess up!
Finally. A puzzle that works for me rather than screwing my brains out!
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10/10/19: DDLC Rough Script
DDLC half-baked script from a low energy me on stream. I'd love to discuss this with you guys. Also, this script's words matches the length of time on screen. Also, I HAVE to do the damn phonetic wahh and ooohs. I have discussions going on in the discord too.
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*Camera shows Dictaphone. Natsuki pops up to investigate.
Natsuki: Huh?! Hmm...
*grabs Dictaphone and spins it on finger
Natsuki: Hehe! Oooh! Make a Wish Recorder?
Huuh... Yeah! I WISH WE WERE CAT GIRLS!
Wha!? uuhhhHHH... HWAH!!!
*Begins feeling her new ears
Natsuki: Oooh cool...
*main character swaggers up to Natsuki not paying attention
MC: Hey Nat, woah!
Natsuki: Nyahhh!
MC: hehe, sorry about that. So what's that you got there?
Natsuki: Uuueeeeh... Hmm...
* she begins to pull it out but now with a plan to keep it rather than show
Natsuki: Heh! I wish he was the size of a toy! Hm, hmm!
*MC shrinks while obtaining new memories each time.
MC: What do you mean by th-? Huh, you look different today. Haircut? Woah, wait! What's going on!- Wait, please! Don't beat me today this time. You look nice! Maybe like an inch taller than yesterday! Wowoah... Man. I never should've accepted this school for giants. Wha- what are you do--ngh!?
*After rubbing MC down with her foot, she suspends it above his body as if ready to stomp Natsuki: I'm just playing with my toy!
MC: NYAH!!!
*Natsuki, after playfully stomping in front of MC, begins to think more deviously
Natsuki: Hmm... I wonder if I can make myself... I WISH I WAS 8 ft TALL!
MC (Now dealing with her growth from below): Je-jeezus! I'm gonna need a much bigger shoe shiner.
*Natsuki is now leaning down to pick her captive up
Natsuki: Aren't you just the cutest little toy! I just want to pick you up and put you in my pocket!
MC: P-puh-puh pocket? Woah...
Natsuki: Awww! So cute! I wonder what would happen if I kept going and going!
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DAY DREAM - Dawn of the Final Day
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*Natsuki is shown above a city street absolutely enjoying her time of taking over everything and getting bigger to take over more.
Natsuki: Hehehee! Nyahahaaa!!
This is so awesome! CRUSH!!
...
And I can just keep growing!
*Clicks Dictaphone and then her brain strikes!
Natsuki: Make me bigg-ah!
wawa-wa--wwait!
If-if I I am this big, then- EVERYONE CAN SEE MY
UNDERWEAR!
AHH! No-no, STOP LOOKING!
*She then crouches down to hide her embarrasment but her wish was granted.
Natsuki: Mmph.
Huh? Wa-ah-ah-ah-ahh! Oh no! I'm still getting bigger!
No, no-no, no, no, no, no!
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YURI'S TIME TO SHINE
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*Natsuki is shaking off her daydream from before
Natsuki: No! No! If not me... then... hm-hm-hmmm.
*Dictaphone clicks while Natsuki aims at Yuri
Natsuki: Make Yuri grow to 30ft tall.
*Yuri is busy enjoying a super dark book when she's struck with Natsuki's wish
Yuri: Nye-e-e-e-e-anh! Ow... what the?
Ngh! My head! Nyuhhhnnn
Oh? Whaah!
*As this latest spurt hits, suddenly the tree she's leaning on gives away. In which she recovers from her landing to spot Natsuki.
Yuri: Nnh. What in the hell? Huh? Natsuki, what are you?
Natsuki: No-no. Not big enough. Double her size.
*The dictaphone is clicked and Yuri is in for another rough ride
Yuri: Wa-ah-ah-ahh-ah-ahnn!
Natsuki: NYES!! WE'RE INVINCIBLE!
Yuri: Um... O-ok?
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Neighborhood Schneighborhood
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*Yuri is walking through a neighborhood while cautiously avoiding from stepping on anything.
Yuri: Umm. Natsuki, I don't think I fit in here.
Natsuki: STOP!
Yuri: Whuh!?
*Natsuki points to a lone car on the road
Natsuki: Crush that.
Yuri: WHAT!? That's someone else's car! We'll be sued!
Natsuki: Yeah, crush that.
Yuri: NO! (Gasps as she sees Natsuki raise the device)
Natsuki: Fine. Double her size again. -Whah! N-gah-get-agh!
*Natsuki is squeezed hard into Yuri's chest as she doubles in size.
Yuri: Nnnnyeahhhnnn!! (Clearly into it but quickly tries to hide it again) Natsuki! This is ridiculous! I don't fit in this street anymore! You need to end this no-
Natsuki: (Clicks Dictaphone) Make her enjoy this.
Yuri: Ah. Nnnh... Heh...
*Yuri simply crushes the car on her way out of the city with no questions asked.
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City Scourge
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*Yuri stomps into the city street to disrupt everything
Yuri: Hm, hm, hmm.
*She then lets Natsuki off her hand onto a nearby building
Yuri: I need more.
Natsuki: Comin' right up! (Clicks Dictaphone)
YURI GROWS WITH DESTRUCTION!
*After grabbing a billboard, Yuri begins her reign of power by stomping with serious power in the street.
Yuri: Yuri in my way. RGH! (I hate you)
*She then crouches down for a sweet roar.
Yuri: GAOOOOO!!!!!!!
*She then spots a nice skyscraper to stab and knock over
Yuri: Standing as tall as me? That's cause for punishment. GRR! RAHHH!!!
*With her growth attached to destruction, she really begins getting into it with an evil laugh
Yuri: Hehahahaaaaa, HAHAHAAAAAA!
*She then buttcrushes an entire block which should have some improv'd sfx and then a growth thing afterwards that follows all the other fun she's having.
Giggling THROUGH the transition it cuts from her sitting to jumping from city part to city part in a path of destruction.
The giggles getting steadily more evil.
*In a bit, Natsuki wakes up in the destruction she's caused to see a mega Yuri.
Natsuki: Huh? No... not like this.
Yuri: Hm, hm, hmmm!
Natsuki: (Clicks Dictaphone in a hurry) I wish we were back at school and-!
*Yuri crushes the entire city, but because the Dictaphone was destroyed things reset to before that and Natsuki gets saved by her last wish. Although it wasn't perfect as Yuri is still in the middle of stomping at the size of what she was just before the city and Natsuki is back in Yuri's hand like in the neighborhood. This confusion causes Yuri to suddenly lose her balance and Natsuki to go flying from her hand as well as the loss of the Dictaphone.
Yuri: HAH! Whuh? Huh? Woah!? Ahn!
Natsuki: Ahhhhhh! (But very quiet from our distance)
Oomph! (As she collides with Yuri's knee)
Uhhhnnn... hu! Wah! NyaaAAAH!
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Minmax part starts
Comments
AZmaybe9
Upon seeing the full message, I'm half-thinking of showing the third person so you can see dis man swiggity swoog up to Natsuki in the most stupidest walk cycle.
AZmaybe9
True that he's totally forgotten. I just used him to set up Natsuki's ambitions.
Roguespirit
It seems like a fun script. The only issue I have at the moment is that the MC feels largely forgotten. I realize he's obviously not the focus of the story and without knowing how the whole project fits together it's tough to make recommendations. It's kinda' late to make much in the way of changes too I guess, but feedback for the future I suppose. Other than that early scene, the MC is used and then forgotten pretty quickly, It wouldn't be so bad, in my opinion, if his part was shown in third-person since we'd be less attached to him that way, sorta like how it worked in you Bowsette video. However, since it's shown from his first-person perspective, we're inclined to feel more attached to him or at least feel that he has some significance to the story besides just being a guinea pig. If we were able to see more things from his perspective on Natsuki's shoulder or in her pocket or wherever he is, like parts of Yuri destroying the city, there would be more point to him, IMHO. I think the Pool Growth video did it better, where Rin was brought back briefly, showing her trying to get to the pool and grow too. It's a small touch but it helps it feel more complete to me. This is just my 2 cents. I hope this feedback helps with your future videos.
Eugenefindit
Oh. Natsuki was embarrassed about having her panties shown. All I could think of from the rough video was Natsuki having a seizure then she started to grow uncontrollably. Yeah, I definitely like this script more. 😁
