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After the Party

🕑 Added 2024-12-03 17:15:04 +0000 UTC

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John Lewis

Nice short story

Ike turner

In the first paragraph you wrote “having drank” shouldn’t that be “having drunk” ? Drank is the past tense of drink, but “drunk” is used after the past participle. Just a little constructive criticism.


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