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Luna

🕑 Added 2025-07-15 12:12:13 +0000 UTC

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Rascal

I subscribed to respond specifically to this. Please, please don't let Luna succumb to Toby. Luna is a strong character. A strong *female* character who serves as contrast to Kim's weakness, mental illness, and corruption. I can't speak for everyone, but from my perspective, to let someone as vile as Toby somehow overcome Luna's intellect and instincts seems contrived and threatens belief. It suggests demeaning her as a 2D narrative vehicle with no agency rather than as the fully fleshed out character she's been so far. Misled or tricked to some extent, perhaps. But to become his plaything, corrupted in the manner that Kim has? Another arrow in his quiver with which to destroy Josh? That's beyond belief. It doesn't fit her at all. I realize that the kink here is the NTR and cuckolding, but this is painful to read sometimes. There are some real characters here with real development, real struggles and real strife and real emotions. There are heroes and villains and unfortunates who fall into the gray between. There's a real story here with real stakes, and I would love to see Josh and Linda come out happy on the other side, but I suspect that is not where this is going. I suppose I need to accept I'm probably not the target audience for this story.