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Chapter 32: Establishing the Lair (New Revision)
🕑 Added 2020-10-23 17:21:15 +0000 UTC
Happy Friday!
Thank you all so much for your help with this one. I was very happy to get such great feedback on the first iteration of this chapter. I took all that advice and decided to change the direction of the Chapter.
I instead went with the original idea for this chapter, and focused on James' plan to establish his lair. This chapter is nearly 5,000 words and has a few fun twists that I was previously holding off on revealing.
There have been remarks about how James seems or feels stupid in comparison to his portrayal as a smart character. I'd ask you to be patient with the story because much of it is intentional. :)
I'll be removing the previous post as it would only cause confusion for new Patrons and people looking for the latest chapter.
Lastly, I hope you enjoy it!
James
Comments
Vacivus
Very good :D
Miguel Canarte
It fits the story now. Thanks
