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Rainette Redraw p°002
🕑 Added 2018-03-27 12:07:42 +0000 UTCHi everyone!!
For Rainette volume 1, I'll redraw some panels of the oldest pages.
Rainette started in 2015 and wah... Some anatomy problems are burning my eyes, and the level gap will be too big between page 1 and page 104 (the last one) for a printed version I think.
I have to keep a few anatomy mistakes tho, so the gap in the same page will not be too much. It's HARD.
So, I'm not redrawing everything, I'm just fixing things when they are too... "Bwergh"... Ahaha.
For page 002, I redrew Rainette in the last panel, but also colored the line (I'll color the line in every pages it wasn't already the case, but don't worry this change doesn't take too much time). I also moved the bubbles that were too high in the page for a printed version and highlighted the foundation pot in the first panel so the readers will see it more clearly.
What do you think of the changes? ^^
Comments
Biscuit
Ahahaha xD True! She's 14 in this page, 15 at the end of volume 1. ^^
Plumy
More like, puberty hit Rainette and she is now a teenager
Biscuit
Merci! Cette page était vraiment celle qui en avait le plus besoin ^^
Pimo.Bee
C'est plus doux pour les yeux ! Je trouve ça mieux même si tout n'est pas refait, ça rajoute une petite touche.. :3
