🕑 Added 2021-04-30 14:47:18 +0000 UTC
Hello, I've been working and making good progress this week, we have around 50 texted pages of introduction, Momo's undressing herself after coming home from school and poor Saruyama, after being age regressed into a toddler, happens to watch Momo undress and goes nuts, the little guy almost dies of arousal lol.
I've linked the finished part of this comic at the end of this post so you guys can check it out, feel free to comment your thoughts and send suggestions. However I won't post it on Pixiv yet since I haven't added any action scene yet (it's right next).
About the action scene, basically Momo goes to Rito's bedroom to prank him (a very dirty prank) but she instead gets pranked by toddler Saruyama who absolutely can't control himself. She thinks she's cooking some spaghetti with her beloved Rito but turns out its Saruyama's sauce who's hiding as a toddler under the blankets.
Regarding the Moonman character, I've decided to make the stories more light-hearted and to give them a sprinkle of comedy (without breaking the flow of the story or the world-building, of course). The Moonman's apparitions are very few, don't worry, I want the story to be as realistic and believable as possible, the character's mainly a plot weapon I can use as a catalyst for events, a side-troll too since all my stories are NTR.
Finished so far:
https://we.tl/t-OrTOSXC9Q0
Password: pietrobellini
If the link expires just message me and I'll send you a fresh one.
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