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The Exalt - Act 1: Blue Ocean Pavilion - Chapter 220: Invicus Bulwark, Rosett's Regrets

🕑 Added 2023-01-02 16:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Unfortunately, imo, the love tangle has become annoying, consuming too much type. I, too, was excited by his newly forged armament and then the romantic woes appeared again - this time with additions! - and the build was overwhelmed by the drama. Truly I enjoyed the way you handled Fred and his psychological and emotional drama and how that dovetailed with his current loveline. But even as I can appreciate the sensitivity and confusion with which Oscar navigates his, Celestina's and Serena's feelings, it all feels increasingly flat as Serena becomes tiresome and Celestina remains a cipher. I sincerely hope this chapter of Oscar's romantic life comes to a head very soon.


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