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Dungeon Diver CH264

🕑 Added 2023-09-18 22:30:46 +0000 UTC
Dungeon Diver CH264

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John Doe

BTW: Example of a lack of planning; Would it not be prudent to pause after the battle and talk to Ember about the nuances of Demonic Power usage BEFORE Jay jumps through the next portal/transfer????

John Doe

Thank you, Author. I must say that I am concerned that the Main Character views every upcoming battle simply as a stat building exercise. It is good to have confidence in life, but maturity and experience should eventually give adults more awareness of their mortality. Jay seems to be completely detached from the possibility of failure/death. Part of growing up is gaining awareness of your vulnerabilities and weaknesses. Your MC seems to think that he does not need to Plan for his next encounter. He seems to work on the assumption that if he thinks positive thoughts, charges harder or hits harder, every thing will work out. I like the story, but the character does not seem to be developing any sense of caution, self-awareness or greater maturity. "Nuff said."


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