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Dungeon Diver CH317

🕑 Added 2023-11-11 00:00:04 +0000 UTC
Dungeon Diver CH317

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John Doe

My primary issue with the things that Jay manages to "pull off" is his less than reasonable risk vs. reward assessments. A fictional character often takes gambles that a "real" person would not because plot armor ensures they will survive. While it is fun for the story's progression, it takes a little away from the story when the "hero" dodges bullets (Matrix Style) and leaps tall buildings every week with little concern for failure. I kinda' like it when the character avoids risk because they are actually afraid to lose their lives (not just the lives of their team members). Jay always seems to assume (like the little engine: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yx9xO98kcBU ) that positive thinking will always win the day. That blissful ignorance diminishes the story if it happens every week.

Nicole Hicks

Jay has done impossibly hard things during many battles throughout this story and managed to pull it off. Even if alot of the time the backlash was usually bad, he still manages to pull it off. This is probably no different. But, the backlash this time could kill this body in the end. I can see him successfully using both at the same time to kill this guy then losing control a tiny bit for a split second and starting the negation process. With the end result of his clone gone and waking up less than a week later and rejoining his team that have had to crash with Chester while they waited for him to get back to them. But that's just a guess on my part. Who knows what the author has decided to do with his characters? But, in the end we will all eventually know. Oh, and Kae, this is a good fight chapter. Keep it up!!

Shadowpulse

Well Ember did mention before that it takes a lot of skill to Manipulate Demon Energy and Mana so it is possible to use them both in tandem without killing the user.


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