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Dungeon Diver CH438

🕑 Added 2024-03-10 23:00:04 +0000 UTC
Dungeon Diver CH438

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Nicole Hicks

Have to agree with Galaktec. The plan is a very good plan. Those gang leaders will never see it coming. They might think something is up with the way Jay got out of the fountain bunker the second time. But they'll not think of this possibility.

b51015

I agree, nice development. but I don’t like the execution (see my comment for details) Btw. Nicole You should be able to edit your comment, look for the three dots, bottom right corner

b51015

HelloFutureMe had a short about this just a week ago. It appeared in my feed today and I thought of the comment I wrote in the heat of the moment https://youtube.com/shorts/0VoNODaw4uw?si=1J5nDFxoAQPhZq-a If you’re interested…

Galaktec

14 min for New chapter 👀

Nicole Hicks

Sorry, stupid buttons!! ... to think to do it like that. You know be sneaky enough to come in and be willing to pretend to be weak enough for the elixir to work on them and capable of hiding it and what they're truly capable of all at the same time.

Nicole Hicks

Of course not! From the grunts and the gang leaders point of view nobody is that magnanimous and altruistic enough to thithink do

Galaktec

Honestly this was amazing 😭. I don’t think anybody coulda guessed that jay would take this route and just steal all there gang members and turn them against them. Now they already scared of jay and will love him for saving their lives.

Louie Duran

I'm not the biggest fan of reading but here I am 438 chapters later and I can't get enough. 15 chapters a day wouldn't be enough. I'm loving this.

b51015

Why do I have to assume they have a way to get rid of the alcohol in their system? You are the author you had them tell their grunts to return in three hours or does the manipulation they have get rid of it that fast? And illogical exposition can be fine in moderation, but “recount” seriously, they’ve both been through it already, he’s basically admitting they are “recounting” it for him. Shouldn’t he suspect a plot at this point. While I don’t know for sure, I’ll probably stick to RoyalRoad Out this book at least, skimming/scrolling until the world building and system messages that interest me appear. Good luck with your next one.

Vergandi

The pacing may be a little slow but I can feel in my bones this is about to ramp up into something jaw dropping I can’t wait for tomorrows! Keep up the amazing work!


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