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Dungeon Diver CH607

🕑 Added 2024-08-26 23:00:06 +0000 UTC
Dungeon Diver CH607

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Keanu

Hey Kae, I love the work you've put into this web novel, I enjoy the story immensely, having given to you through Patreon to be caught up in the latest chapters. But I just wanted to share a couple things that I'm feeling afraid for the future of this story. Every time Jay 'levels up' seriously (Demonic Energy, Qi Energy, Soul Energy, Divine Energy) then defeats a major villain 'ruling the world' (Labyrinth Demons, Lich King, Diving Energy Creatures, Sun God, and now the 8 ruling nation leaders, potential Divine Beats, Arch Demons, Greater Demon King, who knows??) The lore being revealed is great, learning about the greater universe and Jay's next challenges, but it's starting to feel repetitive, 'once he defeats the ruling 8 nation leaders, he'll find the greater power controlling or monitoring them' ... 'once they're removed he's now facing the next strongest, learning the next [Blank Energy], gaining greater power' Yada yada yada. and Jay gets stronger in the same cycle. If that's not the case then ignore my concerns. But I'm afraid it's becoming repetitive, predictable, and boring. I truly love the story so far! And it's my first time commenting, but I wanted to share my thoughts because I believe you actually read the Patreon comments, and who knows, you might gain awareness of how the story has been for a reader, and understand where it's going. For now I'll see where it goes. From a fan and reader.

Dylan Mackey

Ember has a true core that's golden he's just waiting on Jay to unlock his so his limiter is removed to use his

Louie Duran

Both ember and Jay share power and levels. But both of them had to ingest devine cores to gain the power, but would a true core be shared or would ember have to find another way to gain one himself? Idk how that would work.

Tugil

Let’s go leveling up while fighting ^^

HPSCAR

I wish Ember was awake to cow this dragon


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