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Mini Comic Question
🕑 Added 2016-12-21 01:31:35 +0000 UTC So, this month's mini comic is 4 pages (next month's will definately by 3)! I'd like your thoughts on the rough sketch version of the comic. We still have some placeholder text (Safi's last line will be replaced with.. somthing.. I've been playing around with some options), and the dialog in general is still being tweaked and such. Some expressions will be changed as well, etc. It's rough!Anyway, sketches are attatched!
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veeshan123
Awesome comic sketches!
GrimFC
Some contenders for last line: > "how.. limbs first? #$@!, [i]that's[/i] my.. last.. thoug-?" > "Getting..hard...t-to.. think.." > "So.. warm.." > "I...I... ..." (Text getting smaller near end) ---- I also want to insert a reminder that, in this alt-cannon situation, all of their powers have somehow been suppressed, but lack a good spot to put it. Maybe replace the page 2 swear bit with Katoka taunting Safi..? Hrm... yeah, that might work..
