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Plant Food 71 Version 2
🕑 Added 2017-07-07 21:53:02 +0000 UTC We changed the last 3 panels (added the sfx). Thoughts? 71 will be going public later tonight.
Comments
Stark
Honestly I think we can get what's happening without such sfx, it's a bit intrusive and unnecessary imo.
maninblack
It's good
Tokamara
I would say go without this time, it would put more emphasis on the tightening for 72 that way.
Perniciousducks
I like that more. It seems like the plant has been chatting with amber and now its getting back to squeezing. It looked lie it loosened up a bit between dialog shocks, so "squeeze" first, then "tighter", assuming she's getting squeezed even more on 72
GrimFC
Hrm.,. we use tighten on the next page. Maybe we should do without the sfx entirely?
Perniciousducks
I'm not sure I like the word "tighter". I know you've done "squeeze" a few times, but it seems better to me?
Shaun Kelly
So I take it it's supposed to be squeezing her tighter and it feels so good she wants it even tighter?
