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VOTING - Pick a trailer for Carnal Contract
🕑 Added 2024-02-15 10:34:23 +0000 UTCHey Patrons,
I've made 4 trailers for Carnal Contract.
They are all drafts at the moment, with Trailer 2 available on our Steam page.
I think it COULD and SHOULD be better, so I would appreciate your vote and suggestions in the comments.
Please take a look at all 4 and vote on which direction you think we should go with final trailer.
Trailer 1 - With text description - https://drive.google.com/file/d/1_TZaEEgZeKBHFkSmQ_P-X2Jrax3K3_9K/view?usp=sharing
Trailer 2 - lewd scenes in second part - https://drive.google.com/file/d/1FyTcr39gZCWaBMatDyoyElEjWChIK2i8/view?usp=sharing
Trailer 3 - Lewd scenes in first part - https://drive.google.com/file/d/1QuZ0RAiHv2FcChp8_1ousPSopi89cXx0/view?usp=sharing
Trailer 4 - Different music for Trailer 3 - https://drive.google.com/file/d/1p5wJtcYC3J5SSGP46ClDpLSFHueVDVav/view?usp=sharing
Thank you!
Dotty!
Comments
Jonathan Hang
Actually, after rewatching both trailers (Trailer 1 and Trailer 4) for a while, I think both songs are growing on me a little. Before, I was thinking Haxhigeaszy - Planet (instrumental) would have been perfect. But that's just me.
CHRIS BUSENKELL
1st was the only one that seemed to me like there was a story that existed. One that is complex enough that people will have clothes on and such. You have a fantastic story here and I wouldn't make it play 2nd fiddle to the sex aspect of the story...although sex sells...so i guess i'm saying i could go either way on this one. Except 4th, new music was godawful.
Dotty Diaries Game
Combining the bold scenes from trailer 3 with the dialogue from trailer 1. Understood, Jonathan! Do you feel that neither of the songs match or you are referencing just one of them?
Dotty Diaries Game
Blending the first three options seems like the perfect choice :) Thanks, Jeff!
Dotty Diaries Game
I'll look it up right away. did not know about that technique! Thanks, Paltse!
Dotty Diaries Game
Cerberus got it! Thank you :)
Jonathan Hang
I like Trailer 3's lewd scenes more, but I felt like Trailer 1 was the best (mostly because of the text description)! I also just feel like the music doesn't suit the trailer (that's just my opinion).
JeffersonSound
Trailer 2 with the trailer 3 lewd bits. Yes. Perhaps with a bit of the text from trailer 1? Prefer the guitar based music to the piano based music.
Paltse
Hear hear. Also there is this narrative techinque called show, don't tell, which works as well in trailers as in books.
Cerberus
I Personally feel that the First Half of Trailer 4 Song might be alittle too Upbeat for the General Story Background presented Via the Images in the Trailer, I could be mistaken but for me it didn't quite hit the right note. I mean for the Lewd Scene part it feels somewhat fitting but if you were to Replace the Lewd Scenes and keep them in the Second Half the Music wouldn't Fit.
Dotty Diaries Game
Thank you! Got it! Replace the lewd scenes from Trailer 2 with those from Trailer 3 :) What do you think about the music? Does a song from Trailer 4 suit it better than the ones in the previous trailers?
Cerberus
Trailer 2 is a Good Format with the Lewd Scenes in the Second Half but some of the Lewd Scenes from Trailer 3 are Better and could Replace Trailer 2 but Keep them at the End of the Trailer. The Text Description Can Also Add a Touch of Detail that will Enhance some of the Scenes Present during the Trailer.
