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🕑 Added 2018-10-12 03:48:25 +0000 UTC Crepe callback!You know that old newspaper comic Family Circus? How it would do those single panel strips following a character around and showing their path with a black dashed line? The second panel here reminds me of that. Toma Kick!
Ah, crud, I just noticed I forgot his chest wound in the third panel. It never fails.
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Elka should totally go out with him--if only to make Toma jealous. Mind you, I think Bastion's "crepe chef" is more likely to get jealous...
Happens everywhere, the movies and television have teams of people just working on continuity and they still get it wrong. You do great Ashley!
Ashley
The comic business is not for perfectionists! ;D And it really is true. If you pick up any given issue of any comic series off the magazine rack and really analyse it, you'll inevitably find flats the colourist forgot to shade, missing costume accessories, weapons swapping hands between panels, typos, or more often than not, plenty of instances of very sloppy and rushed art. And that's okay because comics are meant to be read quickly. They're not supposed to be precious. So don't let perfectionism paralyze you! <3
Parrott
this is probably a weird thing to say but it just made my day that you forgot to add that detail. Makes me a teensy bit less paralyzed by my fear of making those kinds of mistakes, 'cause the whole page is still awesome.
