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Life with my favorite author. Corruption
🕑 Added 2023-07-20 12:50:37 +0000 UTCwell a more complete comic (I will publish it in a while)
I changed the title, since I think this title is better.
I see some errors in the comic so you know the comic is ready 2 days ago. But I didn't like how my collaborator wrote the scenes, so I sent him what he wanted for each scene and added some scenes.
well let's go to the errors, at times the protagonist yokoi (the man) speaks in the third person and at other times the characters speak in the first person again. so they know every time you speak in the third person it's yokoi speaking.
now in some dialogues the main character is thinking, not speaking. an example is 49, 50, 51 and the rest are the ones he speaks in the third person or when he introduces uzaki.
I wanted to make the personality of the protagonists understand the best possible. Megumi is a troublesome, straightforward girl and her emotions are a mess. Yokoi is a loser who lives alone. there nothing is understood little by little, for more explanations of the story read the previous publication of the comic.
This comic is NTR, the guy doesn't know his girlfriend cheated on him and just like the girlfriend doesn't know her boyfriend cheated on her? Let's just say that was also a hoax. question there will be 2 parts at some point, now it follows all komi-san and a comic that can go inside komi-san 2 or can be separated and published at the same time as komi-san 2.
I don't rule out doing romance comics with netori, netorase or just romance. incest is not ruled out for future comics either.
Well, I don't want to finish all the pending comics and I'll make the game.
Anyway, probably the next comics for Komi-san will be written by me. since there are many differences between what my collaborator does and what I think. It's going to take me more time, apart from making models, I'm going to have to write scenes, but well, I prefer to do it.
in the case of the potion-maker comic I can work with one of you to write. I don't know, I want to advance time and sometimes it's difficult.
