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Bring on the Leisure! [Chapter 1] (Revised)
🕑 Added 2024-02-19 18:35:28 +0000 UTCComments
BuhDussy
Pretty generic start. Nothing really sticking out about this book so far.
Whale
Well I like where it’s going so far. I was a tad confused from the end of the prologue to the start here. It felt like I missed something, could just be me tho. This has elements from a certain novel I very much enjoyed. Interesting…
Tsunami
So the CC's are a blank slate. Very Eldritch vibe so far. Promising.
Conrad Manaugh
Goo!
Jake
"When it clicked this interaction wouldn’t well, its main message was ‘time to panic’." Wouldn't go well?
Jonah Frazier
Interesting. Going for a non-human reincarnation. Seems good so far
PuDDleS4263
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