Maya Ben David
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finally had a brain explosion
🕑 Added 2022-05-05 14:41:29 +0000 UTCARGH, thank you g-d, thank you g-d, thank you!!!
Yes that's right it happened, although there was an aha moment and click, to give myself some credit, I had been crafting themes for a few weeks. HOWEVER, I'm not totally in the clear, I need a funny and interesting script, I need to finish my costume, I need to make a miniature moth sculpture....I might also have to learn a new language to sing a folk song in farsi...we'll see!
Here was my brain explosion: Some species of moths don't have mouth parts, this means they only have 1-2 weeks to live after they leave the cocoon. These two weeks are filled with mating and laying eggs before they die. The end. That's what inspired me! I want to make an amateur scientist character who operates on a moth girl to give her mouth and stomach parts so she can live forever (very Frankenstein or Golem) but she hates what they've done to her. I can't tell you more because my brain is still collecting the pieces from the explosion.
Anyways, I found this EXTREMELY dramatic old Persian song. I think I might be able to work the themes of the song to build narrative. Here's the song, Listen to it while you read the lyrics: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=61XUjd0vDYw&ab_channel=ParsVideo
Love Autumn
Autumn became the garden of encounter
Separation set fire to my soul, once more
My life went by, seeking you my flower
And I saw but deceit and uncaring, from you
I, faithful to you until my blood ran dry
But what could come of love and loyalty for you?
You, like the plague to love’s crop
Like the newest bloom in the garden of the heartless
With your heart of steel- oh
My heart is bloodied from sorrow
This is the thread of my fate
I, drunk on sorrow’s wine
I, enamoured with the enemy
As long as I am (or forever)
(This is a translation of the first half of the song by Pardiss Amerian )
-Your exploded rat
Comments
Maya Ben David
I like the term a lot, you should write something about it
Gwenivere the Ponderous
Yes lol it was sort of like a play on words with genre i think is how i came up with it. Body horror is in the "horror" genre, but tragedy is a much different vibe than horror thus the portmanteau.
Maya Ben David
Thank you!! hehe I appreciate that you see this
Maya Ben David
Oh I didn't even think about that but The Little Mermaid is such a good comparison. Just looked up the greek pantheon myth of Echo and its also very tragic and body horror. "Body tragedy" is a great term wow. Did you just come up with that? I never heard of it before but it's a great description. "Body drama" - dramatic changes to the body. Sounds less coded as a bad or good which has its own potential. I do want speaking and eating do be kind of a horrific thing she has to endure while all she wants is just to lay eggs.
Gwenivere the Ponderous
Very very fascinating, I'm really digging the moth motif here more and more. I love what you're doing with the scientist idea too, it gives me visions of the little mermaid, gaining that supposed boon that comes with an awful price. Or maybe even it's making me think of the greek pantheon myth of Echo, how she can't say anything that isn't repeated. Maybe it's just the ties between mouths and speaking, but I think that's what your ideas are sparking in my own head. Body horror isn't even the right term for it, it's more like "body tragedy". Maybe "body drama"?
Devin Eagles
That is an earth-shattering kaboom
