Maya Ben David
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The Fiberglass Clown
🕑 Added 2024-03-24 18:34:20 +0000 UTCThe new video is out! I took your advice and added a bunch of scenes to the draft I shared earlier. It's about twice as long now and gives a lot more context. Let me know what you think.
-rat pacing around waiting for validation
Comments
Maya Ben David
Thank you so much, Weston! I feel good about it :)
Maya Ben David
Thank you so much! I think the re-work tells a more coherent and emotional story as opposed to being purely strange. I had to do the biopsy bit, even though it was gross for me too!
Weston Wedding
This was fantastic! Might be my favorite one so far, and the length was perfect.
Julian
I'm really enjoying what you did with this one with the rework! The extra stuff makes a huge difference. Generally feels more linked and self supporting. That baby teeth bit and the biopsy bit were nuts. Classic MBD. I'm here for it. :-) Her delight at the twins is so infectious.
