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Pooled Reality 8
🕑 Added 2019-07-07 19:30:44 +0000 UTCSorry for delay, the damn shirt of our bar tender was a pain in two of the scenes, so I had to re-render (frustrating when you buy something only to find something slightly doesn't work in certain situations!)
So here is page 8 :)
As asked in private if this was going to be the same as the caption story - and a little bit. It is based on that story if I had made it a comic instead of a caption story. There is more elements, character building, and then the transformations are longer and more detailed. However, this is a short story while I work through the issues with Wandering Tavern Inn.
Comments
patsy jj
You're far too kind, think it would be nice if more would let you know what they think, maybe they're just shy. Anyway thanks for doing such wonderful stuff, that I feel the need to comment on it :-)
Goldendawn
Well I don't want to give everything away :D - and also I wish more people chatted about my work - it is nice to have people talking about my work - so thanks Patsy :)
patsy jj
Thank you for answering in such a way that you remained suitably obscure on possible future twists :D
Goldendawn
Until SRU Body Suit is finished - maybe - not saying what happens after SRU Body Suit finishes :)
patsy jj
We're too dazzled by it, to cross reference with your other great works (-: Is he going to be a recurring theme?
Goldendawn
well - why not :) Girl of his dreams, and he has killed before - so - isn't really pushing too much on his moral judgement. I am surprised no one has commented that the Bar Tender is the same guy from SRU The Body Suit :D
patsy jj
His eagerness is blinding him to potential reality :D
