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The Quest of Words III: Chapter 1 - Tournament

🕑 Added 2024-08-21 23:20:32 +0000 UTC

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BrokenOlive

Thanks for the chapter! I'm finally getting around to catching up on this. Apologies for any weird spaces as I'm on a phone and patreon is not particularly geared towards suggesting edits. Grammar tweaks; ...out, but from I'm seeing, her opponent... -> ...out, but from what I'm seeing, her opponent... “Every time I mention it, she starts rambling on about symbolism and implications and having to the study the underlying… -> “Every time I mention it, she starts rambling on about symbolism and implications and having to study the underlying… The following is more a suggestion, assuming this wasn't intentional. Certain of my followers may have liked to call me a lord, but that was more of an inside joke than anything official. -> Certainly, my followers may have liked to call me a lord, but that was more of an inside joke than anything official. as they pushed through the crowd. -> I'm assuming you hit tab as there is an abrupt paragraph spacing.

Nathaniel Bartley Logee

Good!

Nathaniel Bartley Logee

I'm glad you liked it :)

Tabitha Mularkey

I'm so excited to see you've started this one. I was getting antsy. Great first chapter.

Ryan

Love it. Always so many mysteries, like how is Xyn copying Jax’s skill? Looking forward to finding out. Really glad Jax has completed her trial finally, I was empathising with her frustration about how long that was taking. Also I went back to reread last book’s final chapter. That really is a fantastic epilogue.

Jack5d5

I can't wait for the next chapter!


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