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Small update
🕑 Added 2024-10-17 03:18:22 +0000 UTCNo major story update as I’m pretty ill and have been for a few days. That said, I’ve made some changes to Verdant 3 throughout
Slight spoilers ahead!
To make the destabilization of the growing empire more realistic, there are now references to
- Petros being a Raasland army survivor, and there being others like him around Coalis
- The Caprean States having a slave trade, something Vera outlaws without considering the economic impact, and the resulting revolts/economic collapse and the fact that the army there needed to step in
- Raasland itself being so destitute most of its citizens with any kind of mobility feel obligated to move to Coalis, causing an ever-worsening refugee crisis
- Worshippers of Vera harassing or assaulting people who don’t subscribe to her sainthood.
It’s small stuff, but a story like this needs to cohere. Anyway I hope you’re all doing okay and I’ll see you soon, I promise.
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Flora P-Stylianides
i hope you're feeling better soon
