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Ch 112 - Higher Wisdom Pays Off For Once

🕑 Added 2025-01-01 17:00:17 +0000 UTC

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Frank Morin

Thanks for your comment. I'm so glad you're enjoying the book!

Frank Morin

Thanks for your thoughtful comments. I'm still working out exactly how to revise and fine-tune the relationships.

Edna Benedito Augusto

I mean I get it it a difficult situation and they actually like each other, but I think a relationship this early, while fighting for their lives and Earth is not going to work. We already saw how mindless he gets , so for me it's a no no. Anyways I love the book , can't wait for more

NightOwl

That's a difficult decision in your poll. I admit that it is a bit off-putting, but as soon as I read something like "because of Isabella, he quit his job(s)," I was like, okay, red flag for Isabella. :D Maybe that was just me reading between the lines. I don't actually know if you've written something like that explicitly. That got me a bit uncaring towards her, but cheating is still not good and doesn't actually fit Lucas in my mind at least. I think it might also be a good idea to reverse your second option somewhat. So, Lucas could actually end the relationship due to Isabella not fully accepting him and maybe not even wanting to understand him completely. She could be trying to change him during their time together—whether intentionally or not. She might do so without any malice and still be deeply in love with him. Perhaps his friends tried to warn him about the relationship as soon as it became apparent that he was changing because of it, and that he was suffering as a result. Lucas has loved his jobs but quit them anyway because he wanted to be with Isabella and truly believed they loved each other. However, over time, he could come to the realization that the relationship isn't good for either of them and decide to end it. After that, he could go on the tour with his friends to clear his mind or something along those lines. So when the survivors return, you could add a scene ( Isa and Lucas having a heart-to-heart) or even a little drama with Isabella trying to get him back if you want :D and then the heart-to-heart. Sorry for my babbling :D I think my text has gotten long, I got carried away a bit. BUT that is all totally up to you. This is YOUR story and you can tell it how you want. And I actually like how it turns out.


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