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Ch 244 - Nectar From Above

🕑 Added 2025-11-24 17:00:08 +0000 UTC

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Frank Morin

Thanks for the feedback. You're right about the loot. Already working on edits to trim that back, and to also flesh out the town storyline.

Tornhoof

So the length of book 3 is better than book 2. A few nice boss fights, but I still think the loot descriptions are too long, too much useless loot. Progression could have been faster, but I unserstand the split into two books. The town storyline could use a bit fleshing Out. The "romance" with Ruby was meh. Either cut it or flesh it out.


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