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Intercepted!
🕑 Added 2022-02-17 06:03:49 +0000 UTCThis 6.8k word story is a revamp of a Tumblr story that I wrote last year involving Buffalo Bills players Mitch Trubisky and Josh Allen. To read it, click here for part one and here for part two.
When it came to the ending, I couldn't decide between my original dark ending or something much more happier. Eventually, I went with the happy ending for Mitch, but this bad ending idea remained something that I still really loved to this day. As such, opening up this Patreon allowed me to finally have the opportunity to go back, rewrite, and release this alternate yet original version of the story.
For those who thought the Tumblr version was a bit too happy, you're going to absolutely love the karma that this ambitious backup quarterback receives in this version!
Comments
Henry Cavanaugh
Huge fan of this version! Tough to dcide which I like better because they're both fantastic bodyswap tales!
Nate
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this version! I very much enjoyed both this "just desserts" scenario and the age difference aspect, so it's nice to hear that someone else did too!
Luke K. De An
Ooh, loved this. I enjoy the originally posted one, but the added age difference in the swap makes it even better.
