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AFiF 4, Chapter 36: The Future Festival

🕑 Added 2025-04-21 10:16:30 +0000 UTC

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gigamans

Prophecy can be an interesting plot device, but it's gotten to the point where every conversation is about that or blood magic. The prophecy stuff is too much. It feels like Harry has no agency in this story, if you want the character to be pulled along by Grindelwald's decades-long plot and machinations sure, that's super interesting. But maybe just have that be revealed at the end or something, because here it just feels like everything he's doing is irrelevant, and leading to some predetermined outcome, if that makes sense? Also every smug character who speaks to him like they know everything and he's just some tool for a greater purpose or he's just a moron doing what he's told is extremely annoying to read, hoping Luna catches a stray curse or something, not to mention the weird ass old women at Durmstrang.

Marek Orbo

It's so juicy though. Its' really peak writing and rare amazing ship.

Michał

I enjoy this story very much, but I can't lie that fourth year is just too long.


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