amberjack
fanbox
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Comments
Wolfking
The translation is pretty good, for going through a translator. Also love seeing the king of the pirates, become the queen of dicks
ok tk bro
Hadorian
The text placement is confusing to read, I'd recommend using different colors for whose saying what. So nami would be orange Robin would be purple And Luffy would be red. I'd also put the dialog in a way that draws the eye to them, just to make it easier to read
