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Chapter 385B

🕑 Added 2025-06-21 15:03:01 +0000 UTC

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Striker

Hi, and thank you for the thoughtful feedback. I’m sorry to hear the story didn’t click for you in the long run, but I really appreciate you sticking with it as long as you did. If the direction’s been frustrating, I would recommend taking a break. That is what I do when I am not satisfied with the direction of a story. Found that helps sometimes. I’ve got two other fanfics running, and a few more on the way. If any of them happen to match your tastes better, I’d be glad to see you there. Either way, thank you again for the support so far, and I wish you the best in your future reads!

N

Thank you for the chapter, and for your work so far. But, I think I'll be dropping the story, honestly, I've thought about dropping it some time ago. It has basically become a cliche power fantasy where the main character has every type of power, gets away with whatever they want. And the power-ups started feeling more and more convenient. Kaelith gets Quincy powers because a long dead soul reaper created them against a threat, but apparently never told anyone about it...and only he can use it... He gets fullbring powers out of nowhere by accident because he fixed an experimental soul... Or how about how he can just take a zanpakuto from someone and use their bankai out of nowhere? Mind you, Kaelith has not one, not two, but three different zanpakuto he's walking around with... The Yamamoto situation is even worse, honestly. Kaelith publicly used the powers of hollows and quincies, which by itself could be forgiven with their relationship. However, he keeps hidden forces from them as well. Then proceeds to murder and control the leaders of the Soul Society, and faces no backlash when it is found out. And not even once did Kaelith provide an explanation for any of this because: "It's cool, Kaelith is basically Yamamoto's son." I kinda stopped here because I also wasn't really a fan of Kaelith essentially stomping most of Squad Zero. Holding back the entire time just to gain experience. Again, thanks for the story. I had fun and I wish you well, but this is not something I want to follow anymore...


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