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Slight Extraπ΄πΊ for Chapter 41
🕑 Added 2023-07-20 04:41:41 +0000 UTCSometimes I'm too focused on 'show, don't tell,' but it can be frustrating. So, I consulted my draft and added several bits of extra to improve the scene. π
This particular scene takes place after Lansius got into an unsatisfying chat with Audrey, and before he rides into the forest and meets Felis. I hope this extra is able to shed some light on what Audrey is doing behind Lansius' back.
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βCecile, ensure our staff treats the messenger well. Iβll meet him tomorrow along with the council members,β Lansius instructed. Then, to his squire, he said, βSterling, letβs go for a ride.β
The two attendants bowed in acknowledgment.
Lansius felt he needed to add something. βCecile, there's no need to inform your father about this.β
Cecile smiled and nodded. βYes, My Lord, I understand.β
The last thing he wanted was another training session.
Just as he was about to depart, Cecile motioned for a private word. Lansius nodded once in acknowledgment and spoke to Sterling, "Prepare the horse for me. I'll be there soon."
The squire nodded and headed toward the stables.
"What is it?" Lansius asked gently.
"Pardon me, My Lord, but I think you need to know that Lady Audrey is trying her best to practice archery on her own."
"Archery? You mean with bows?" Lansius asked, showing great interest.
Cecile nodded. "Yes, My Lord. She's bought two from the tribesmen."
Lansius sighed. "She could have told me about this."
Cecile giggled. "No lady likes to show when she's fumbling. It's considered unsightly."
Lansius could only smile. "How good is she with the bow?"
"Right now..." She shook her head. "Especially not on horseback."
"She trained horseback archery on her own?"
"Indeed, My Lord. She believes it's more practical to use bows on horseback than mini crossbows. She... Lady Audrey is trying hard to be useful in her own role."
Lansius nodded silently. He knew Audrey had been addressing many issues, acting as the matriarch that held the female staff together and kept the younger staff in check. She was also the figure that the rest of the army respected.
Cecile continued, "My Lord, please don't mention this to anyone."
"Gratitude, I will heed my trusted cup-bearer's advice."
Cecile smiled and bowed slightly. Lansius then headed towards the stables in a much better mood.
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