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Chapter 218 The Weight of the Vow

🕑 Added 2025-01-24 11:00:52 +0000 UTC
Chapter 218 The Weight of the Vow
Chapter 218 The Weight of the Vow
Chapter 218 The Weight of the Vow
Chapter 218 The Weight of the Vow
Chapter 218 The Weight of the Vow
Chapter 218 The Weight of the Vow

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Mr. Sunday

Thanks for the chapter! I think that trying to create an Esprit de Corps in the Shogunate´s Army may be a good idea. At the end of the day, Its soldiers come from every corner around the World, so It may be useful to implement some training to generate on them the feeling that They´re becoming part of an elite army compared to the Feudal Troopers, to fear the strict discipline , and some special rituals or Leit Motive, like the award of the Kepi Blanch and the "Legio Patria Nostra!" of the Foreing Legion.

micronesia

[[knowing they would inevitably face again at Riverstead]] is a bit awkward, especially considering the next sentence starts with "Faced." I suggest at least saying "face off" or rewording more thoroughly. [["Where are you planning to leave?" Sir Justin asked, startling them.]] Did he mean to ask 'when'? Did he mean "where are you going"? Bit unclear.

micronesia

You say that Hanne, but we know in a few chapters Lansius will be launching nuclear-tipped intercontinental ballistic missiles all over the place :D

CapptainT3ddy

Are you talking about the lobsters? House spaghetti? I don't know what you're on about but I'm dead serious a 100% of the time

teeheehee

In Hanne we trust , also I like that you're making culverins so damn expensive, helps with the acceptance of no mass production/steamrolling

Hanne

teddy! people don't understand your joke if you don't use emoji XD

CapptainT3ddy

Preferably the most stereotypical Italian you can imagine

foo-jin

It might be traitors in that one city in lowlandia, but I dont think they were this capable

Duke of Coffee

Gottfried or the Second Prince maybe? Beastmen could be a candidate for it but seems unlikely? But hmmmmm.

CapptainT3ddy

I don't remember either. The author is just making us buy his books to reread them

OccasionalNewb

Give me pike and shot or give me death! I'm joking, but I would like to see it.

Duke of Coffee

Damn so either the Beastmen Confederation are being smart, huh, Gottfried is using said Beastmen, Navalnia Empire having fun or Nicopola playing I'm a pirate game? Welp looks like Lansius will have to rely on the Lord Dawn acumen to guard his southern trade since he can't be everywhere at once.... And the blood debt has been half paid and the weapon dealers have to go back to establish their workshop. 🤔

Ghostdog

Man.. this is so tough! Or I am just stupid 😭

Kalidans2

Lol, the first Lord of this house should be from the earth

Kalidans2

The beast nation on South

Kalidans2

Hanne, this chapter is fire. Now your book feels even much realistic than it was before, because Lansius dreams about easy West-East trade way have face real life, where some nations and people don’t forget to revenge if they can to. In real life we all the time see how our dreams face reality and their challenges. Thank you that you have heard my opinion about pirates and other things. 10/10

SunderGoldmane

I don’t know either.

Hanne

It should be featured in 4 or 5 chapter after this one, they're still draft

Hanne

Yes, old enemy, we have read at least two "battles" and a skirmish against them 🤗

Ghostdog

Old enemy? What old enemy?

CapptainT3ddy

Still not seeing a House Spaghetti


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