Malcolm Tent
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A Novel Approach chapter 52
🕑 Added 2024-12-19 20:27:43 +0000 UTCReturning home and arming up
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Creature of Grimm
A bit of foreshadowing about the dad there...nothing special, I'm sure...lol
Malcolm Tent
Nah. I couldn't justify that story beat. Conversations to upgrades to conversation doesn't flow as well. I think it works better as is.
Joshua Graham
> "made up some story about Blake needing to lie low from an abusive boyfriend." This seems like a "show, don't tell" moment.
