Muhammad Shafiq Mohd Nizam
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Chapter 88: Tribute (Part 1)
🕑 Added 2023-05-02 07:02:10 +0000 UTCComments
Ototsu_Yume
I would have thought the Kakashi thing would have been countered by his perfection ability from Mr. Omnipotent, or at the very least changed somewhat due to his skills making him always fashionably late where everyone seems to think it's cool for some reason.
Kheiven Dhaiti
There's this thing you do with the pov; I don't know if it's intentional; an example would be at the start where the mc uses Batman's skill to go unrecognized; Andre says, "Wait. Who is that? Why does he know my name?", then the mc goes, "I didn't hear his suspicions as I was already turning on a corner to get to Dunphy's street.". I noticed this, and the weird part is the logic. The first part of the sentence should not be there if he didn't hear Andre. I would change it to "he didn't hear his suspicions as Edward was turning a corner to get to dunphys street" Good chap tho
thedistraction
thank you! also I hope you're feeling better!
Skarpi
still be careful tho
LX
Thanks for the chapter. Hope you are feeling better
Muhammad Shafiq Mohd Nizam
it's fine now. I was dizzy for a whole day before lol
Muhammad Shafiq Mohd Nizam
another one coming in a few min. the last one will be in a few hours tho
thedistraction
thanks for the chap! so those 3 chaps are they going to be all at once today or spread out?
Amar Haikal
Next chapter tomorrow or tonight?
Skarpi
ty and how's your injury ?
