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Chapter 109: Meeting God.

🕑 Added 2023-06-14 02:11:22 +0000 UTC

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Kasme 12

Nightshadeq8

I recommend you add a few "Yo"s for Eminem in his dialog. He always says that IRL

Muhammad Shafiq Mohd Nizam

nah, i will mention it when he used it

Skarpi

Yes! thank you !

Muhammad Shafiq Mohd Nizam

yeah i'm finishing up and waiting for my editor

Skarpi

is there a chapter for today?

Oni

Yes!!!!!!

noyibo

can you mention when he's using his soul Voice or is he always using it while singing ?

Ouki's Lips

I like the idea of him being Dom’s actual family. Though it might be more realistic to make him lettys cousin or something.

Ototsu_Yume

Loved the chapter, I can see Taylor thinking she was cheated on by Mathers here if it releases first lol.

SaltySpitton_

Love the rap inclusion. Great job my dude

Nathan Richards

Love this book so much I really hope ed ends up with Taylor I’d love to see more of her

Joseph

You should 100% have ed sometime when he thinks he’s in his studio alone sing ‘enormous penis’ by da Vinci notebook and have someone hear him as a joke

KingSpy25i .

Thank you for chapter, it was great and I wish I could read more but I won't pressure you because I prefer you being fine, than reading more chapters. Also wouldn't the title for the chapter "Meeting A God" be better?

noyibo

Has the story timeline already included the music video of "Taylor Swift - You Belong With Me"? ( it was released on 16 Jun 2009) if not you can make Ed act on the music video 🤔

KingSpy25i .

To tell you the truth for me almost anybody other than Hayley would be a good match for him and again, this is my opinion only, mostly because I think that she may be a little to wild for him, in what way? I can't explain it, mostly a feeling.

KingSpy25i .

Yeah, can you please write by who because I just looked it up? And there are a lot of songs with the same name. Edit: The closest thing to what you are saying is one from a artist named "Munn" and it's pretty good 👍

Marc Daniel Manalili

I hope not, I'm on team Tayward

noyibo

by ?

Kylan Trinh

Can you get him to sing “can you here me” when he starts to get over his problems

Skarpi

is Hailie gonna appear? She's about the same age as Ed when Not Afraid was released, i think. Thanks for the chapter

Wrobe06117

Poor taylor and you including FF here also?

Marc Daniel Manalili

Ok, my only critic in this chapter is that M is never late, he treats his projects like common salary man schedule. 8 in and out in 4 and he doesn't compromise in this sched even when collaborating with other artists. Also please make Ed a relative—a cousin may be— of Dom, cause I really want to see(read?) him using his driving skills more.