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Chapter 171: Am I late?

🕑 Added 2023-11-11 16:40:14 +0000 UTC

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Archangel

Man, that keyword "beautiful" reminded me of that direction song "What Makes You Beautiful". It would be a great song for the public, the sheer amount of fangirls Ed would get.

Dead3nd

Great chapter Sir Author, was expecting the concert at Vegas to be a whole chapter or two seeing as you said there was going to be a "Special Surprise" when he announced it at the charity event but still good to see the story progression a little bit more. I like the Edley ship but steer carefully if you go too fast it's a rebound and if you go too slow she has "relationship withdrawals" 😂. Overall great chapter can't wait for more and to see how he and his past memories of football do as a "substitute" I forgot whose memories he inherited but I am sure they would not let him be a substitute. They'd be too ashamed. 😂😂😂😂

Cesar Montemayor

lol I’m still hoping for the Taylor romance and reading this story it making me want to try write a story now lol but I still haven’t decided if I should do it

Cedrick Jacobe

Haley and Edward hehehe letss goooooooooo “ Ladies and gentlemen, this is your captain speaking, I repeat ss. Edley is currently on route and going strong”😊😊😊😆😆😆😆