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Sweet Dreams: How did I get Isekai!? (Ch. 1)

🕑 Added 2024-09-16 02:39:45 +0000 UTC

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OmegaStreamline

This was a pretty good read. I like the establishing of the world prior to the characters getting sent to the sugar world; not all isekai-type stories do that. There was a solid mix of fetishy stuff with story stuff, though for the most part the latter half was just story which I feel might turn some readers away. But for me personally, I was invested enough at that point to keep going and see where things went. I’m interested to see how this story develops, and I’m especially interested in how Kira’s dream at the start seems to be connected to the world she got teleported to at the end.

SlimeyJayStudio

Thanks for the feedback. That was one big reason I wanted to do a duel perspective for this story. It's fun to show different POVs and how characters react to situations.

Navix

I like the direction this is going. I feel bad for Kira for what she went through but thankfully she has some good friends and a boyfriend to make sure she is okay. I do like the shared world aesthetic, with all the characters knowing and acknowledging each other, so for me that is a huge win and it makes the world all the more lively. Really looking forward to seeing how the story will progress, and the accompanying art is really solid too!! P.S. I didn’t know Ryker’s hair was black with blue accents, that explains a lot as to why I found strong favor in him lol.


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