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Sweet Dreams: The Elephant in the Room (Ch. 2)

🕑 Added 2024-09-22 18:28:28 +0000 UTC
Sweet Dreams: The Elephant in the Room (Ch. 2)

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SlimeyJayStudio

This was a fun chapter to write, as I got to show more of the characters in this new situation. As well as set up who are the main players and setting up whats to come.

Navix

Solid continuation, generally speaking, love the character dynamics that are happening between Zhi, Mako, and Hiruka. Seeing their back and forth feels really normal, if that makes sense. Also love the idea of background detail being given to Kira with her reminiscing about her sister and the slimes while being surrounded by the loaf dogs.

SlimeyJayStudio

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. The few fetish scenes in this chapter were really fun to write. I hope I can keep this up for chapter 3.

OmegaStreamline

This was a pretty good chapter to this story. It feels like the natural follow-up to the previous one, exploring how each character reacts to the sweet world around them while also establishing some plot points to go off of for the future, such as the supposed village Mako found. The more fetishy scenes were quite fun as well; I especially like the visual of Mako and Hiruka trying to roll Zhi. It’s interesting as well to see bits of lore that I either didn’t know about or are new, such as Hiruka’s water spewing ability or Kira’s sister Skye


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