Criticism Post

I would honestly say that there are quite a few mistakes and sometimes it does harm the comics. Some of the comics have more than others, but redoing the dialogue with some assistance would certainly be beneficial!

Martin Whitmore

There are usually a couple mistakes in each issue, but they don't take away from the feel of the comic. If they were fixed, the comics would be a little better - but your meaning is always easy to understand, so I wouldn't call it necessary to make the changes.

Well I’m not the best at English but I always assumed that was how the people of the verse spoke like an accent

SDM74

You need a proof reader? I'll volunteer!

There are a few misspelled words or grammar issues/ odd usage of words per chapter, but its never been enough to confuse or muddle the point. At most i will reread a sentence to make aure i got it right, but i honestly do that anyways. I dont think you should put much thought into going back and fixing older chapters unless it really bothers you personally. Plus as weird as it sounds the odd english bits were always a little charming to me

Gerph 18up

wow that really surprise me, i can´t imagine how it works in your eyes haha

Binjaaaa

You've definitely improved over the period of time you've been running the comic for. The earlier chapters are a bit iffy but other than that I still enjoy the overall experience :)

Straqt

I dont know why but ive always kinda liked your slightly incorrect English in the comics. I feel like it adds style and personality even if its unintentional.

MalletShark

There are errors for sure, and I think that if you want to fix them you should! However, i don’t think that those small grammar things are a deal-breaker for anyone here. Do what you want!

IronBridge

The comic is fine more or less, just the one or two grammar mistakes or misspellings per chapter I'd say. Nothing I wouldn't expect from physical comics either, people fuck up from time to time. I will say however that the Mint tier says "indea" instead of idea and the Eclair tier says "galeries" instead of galleries, though.

Big Money Jugs

English is fine to be honest, a few mistakes here and there but I understand it all and if anything I like it from Skarpne and Undi because they're aliens it kinda fits haha

Willit Dark

The grammar doesn't bother me. Your English is vastly better than my written in a second language. There are only a few small errors ever so often

Ace The Caesar

ur grammar could use revisions, mostly in the older chapters, but I wouldnt consider high on the priority bracket.

netjunkie13

Your errors are few and your English is improving all the time.

Juustan

I think you are doing fine. I mean I dont notice any grammar errors and if I do they dont prevent me from understanding what you ment.

Momo

I don't think it's disastrous, but occasionally I have to re-read certain parts if the typo confuses me. Not the biggest deal, though! I don't think it detracts too much ❤️

Master Dragon

Your English is good and your comics are good. You keep improving on things slowly.