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Chapter 46 - The Burden of Competence

🕑 Added 2025-01-28 22:49:06 +0000 UTC

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Daf High-Voltage

There is a moment where Millie talks about Annelie using her true name but then gets confused when Nova does the same. You should probably clarify that.

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter!  Hmm unfortunatley next chapter will see me all caught up... Oh well I really enjoyed the read so far! But it seems the mystery of the Missing Signus will not be solved for now lol!

Nwn

Thanks for pointing it out! I need to edit more thoroughly going forward...

Caleb Reusser

As he is leaving after the crafting you have that each step felt heavier and then the next paragraph he left the room with light steps. The switch in how you described his steps seems weird to me.


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