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Chapter 92 - True Form

🕑 Added 2025-04-03 17:08:24 +0000 UTC

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Nwn

Ah, I guess I should have been clearer about the force of the impacts in general. I imagined it as him being flung back through the air and landing on his feet, then carving the furrows. It's not well explained, so I'll try to word it better.

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter! I liked the fight... But I can't help but think some of it was a little inconsistent? I have one example that I think shows that best but its all minor stuff lol like this: "He BLOCKED with his KNEE, reinforcing the joint with a concentrated layer of essence. The force of the impact drove Nova backward. His FEET carved TWIN FURROWS in the EARTH as he controlled his trajectory, bringing him to a halt by the edge of a forest" So basically IF Anny punches his MIDSECTION and he BLOCKS with a KNEE... Thats fine right pull the Knee up and it works lol... BUT then he will not be carving twin furrows into the ground from impact... it will either be a single on because unless he shapeshifted his leg to have a much longer Shin, it cannot both block a gut punch and have a foot on the ground OR more likely he would be thrown back and only need to find his footing with both feet... I think there might a few of those little things. That from a physical perspective don't add up even if we substitute "Magical power Laws of Physics" XD Overall a great read though!! I still prepare the actual story over fights but thats just my tastes :)


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