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Pure Light chapter 03 - 17
🕑 Added 2022-05-13 10:00:05 +0000 UTCIn the original script the Freedom Flyers talk like actual sociopaths. Which at the time was not an issue because Pure Light wasn't a very serious comic. And so the character acting like this situation is a big joke fitted. I wish the story had stayed that way. I'm the on to blame for the change in tone. I didn't pay attention to things like that at the time.
Now, when tidying up the script, I try to be tonaly consistent. Even if it feels more severe than I'd personally have liked it to be. Fewer quips and more getting to business. RIP.
I will try to keep up the weekly updates.
Comments
Darkan
My goodness, this is such a difference in lighting and dynamic poses! The changes for the third and forth panels make them flow a lot better with how the darkers are around Casi! You did an incredble job on this page!
